A poem

0  2020-05-29 by Volkstrummer

George Floyd,

George of the Jungle,

Black as he can be,

AHHHHHHH!

Watch out for that Knee!!

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As an english literature major, I would like to kindly suggest a few notes.

  • please use more poetic techniques.

  • Considering adding more stanzas to tell a stronger story

  • consider using more than just visual imagery. There are plenty more such as aural, tactile, olfactory and gustatory.

  • consider opening your poem with an epigraph (a quote to start your poem, ideally relevant to the themes of the poem)

Can I suggest you read into Langston Hughes and Maya Angelou?

I'll have a venti caramel frappuccino, thanks.

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