A poem
0 2020-05-29 by Volkstrummer
George Floyd,
George of the Jungle,
Black as he can be,
AHHHHHHH!
Watch out for that Knee!!
0 2020-05-29 by Volkstrummer
George Floyd,
George of the Jungle,
Black as he can be,
AHHHHHHH!
Watch out for that Knee!!
5 comments
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2 dramasutra2020 2020-05-29
As an english literature major, I would like to kindly suggest a few notes.
please use more poetic techniques.
Considering adding more stanzas to tell a stronger story
consider using more than just visual imagery. There are plenty more such as aural, tactile, olfactory and gustatory.
consider opening your poem with an epigraph (a quote to start your poem, ideally relevant to the themes of the poem)
Can I suggest you read into Langston Hughes and Maya Angelou?
1 pnw_1776pt2 2020-05-29
I'll have a venti caramel frappuccino, thanks.
1 ManBearFridge 2020-05-29
6.5 out of 10