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The dialogue is stilted and dumb and there's plenty of signs of novicehood, but his main problem is that he's just not vulnerable enough.

The author seems to feel that it's not enough to just say "okay, I like making embarrassed girls shit themselves. Today I'm going to write a sadistic story about blushing girls pooping themselves ." He has to make it more than that. He has to, pretentiously, turn it into this kind of revenge fantasy. And whenever the story turns away from the act of pure pooping—which is doubtless where he invests his most enthusiastic and most joyful writing—the whole endeavor just devolves into silliness.

“If ‘women are people,' does that mean men aren't people? Isn't that a bit sexist?”

Who is he trying to fool with dialogue like that? Who cares if anything anymore is "a bit sexist"? We're forcing women into poop jail here.

He is an incel, obviously, but he's not just being an incel. He's almost perfunctorily playing the role of incel. His heart isn't in it. It's all just set dressing to get to the pooping. Am I wrong to see a kind of anxiety in that? A kind of lurking doubt that people could relate to a story about pooping if it wasn't dabbing on feminism? But everybody shits, my friend.

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i dont like wheel of time

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Russian :marseyazov: formalist or Frankfurt school :marseyeric: or gtfo

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It's all just set dressing to get to the pooping.

This line will be in my trip advisor review the next time I dine at a Michelin star restaurant. Thank you.

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This part seems heavy handed, seems that you could have woven some of these elements into the dialogue rather than just infodumping halfway through

>The Freeuse Act. It had been a glorious miracle: finally passing after months of heavy deliberation in Congress, with even some support from girl politicians. Before that preceded centuries of sanctimonious puritanism. From at least the 20th century girls had been treated as equals—even superiors—to men, given every legal right that a man had. Given special treatment. And for centuries prior, while girls were not treated equally, r*pe had still been considered unethical and illegal in America and abroad.

>For a man to lay with a girl, he had to marry her and, ideally, sleep only with his wife. While casual s*x became the norm in the 20th and 21st centuries, it still required a man to date the girl. Woo her, ask her out, wine and dine her endlessly—usually over multiple dates—until she eventually gave her so-called consent and invited the man to partake of her body. And at any point she could always say no, as if her comfort was worth more than a man's. Rejection was the norm, with most American men sleeping with only 15 or fewer girls during his entire lifetime.

>No thought was given to men's immediate needs to fulfill their biological necessities. This was considered a luxury, only to be fulfilled with full consent of the woman. There was no national conversation on the dire circumstances of millions of involuntary celibates, horny husbands, victims of teases, and otherwise law-abiding male feminists. Their libidos remained neutered and ignored. Almost every single man lived quiet lives of desperation as girls and their bouncing breasts and enticing buttocks walked among them, unmolested, for fear of ostracism and legal consequences. All in the name of “fairness.” Those were the dark times

>A month or so ago this would have been considered a r*pe by the government. This officer would have been tried for his crime of wanting to satisfy his libido. The very concept of masculinity was criminalized. Even evaluating her body quietly to himself was considered objectification and unethical under any circumstances.

>But now, it was just a Tuesday. Men taking advantage of their birthright, having previously been called “r*pe”, was now encouraged. In fact, some of the men who had been tried and convicted of r*pe had been set free. As it turns out, theirs had been a victimless crime all

This is totally hamfisted and kills the mood, I understand the intent is male domination and destruction of feminist theory through r*pe but it could have been done without these r-slurred monologues.

>Umph, uhnhh,” whimpered 8001, Johnston's conquering peepee thrusting in and out of her anal canal. Johnston slid his hand down he back to her neck, then cupped her throat and squeezed it, choking her whimpers. It pleased him greatly to turn his sexual excursions into struggles. After some time, 8001 tapped his fist and choked out “Stop.” He loosened his grip enough to let her survive.

>“This isn't a r*pe, you know,” he murmured into her ear, steadily stirring her guts. He gave her some time to object, if only mentally, then continued. “R*pe, as sociologists say, is about power. I was commanded to r*pe by a superior officer and thus have no power. So this cannot be called r*pe.”

>If 8001 objected to his logic, she didn't show it. She merely lay on the floor, sweating and grunting as he struggle-fricked her shithole. She looked back, biting her lip, then said quietly, “You have power over me.”

>Johnston stopped mid-stride. “Not at the moment. If either one of us resists, we get punished.” Johnston wiped his brow, staring at 8001 in mock sympathy.

>8001 hadn't been punished for her little outburst, so she continued. “He's gone now. You could stop and he'd never know.”

>Johnston squared his jaw as he thought to himself. He resumed slowly fricking her and 8001 winced. She resumed staring ahead, probably so he couldn't see her grimacing. “I suppose I do... enjoy the power as well, but it's because I find it... sexy. It makes me hard. If this is a r*pe, r*pe is about s*x.” 8001 gave no response.

Easily the weakest part of the work where the purpose becomes muddied with a desire to add depth which isn't needed and should have instead been woven into the s*x acts themselves.

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Brenton :marseytarrant: Easton :marseybateman: Ellis?

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English majors aren't real degrees.

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Carp, I'm worried about you.

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carp rn

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@lain :marseysoypoint:

Dude! It's like Lain's dad's computer, from cereal Lain!!!

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:marseyletsfucking#go2:

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I don't get it :marseysad:

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Me too, he keeps simping for that deranged stalker moid :marseyill:

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@Pl?

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No, @IIIIlIlllIlIlIIl my love


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Yes, @Pl, like I said deranged moid :marseysmug2:

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He's even stealing dog pics now :#marseyemojirofl:

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trans lives matter

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he used to post on incel ruqqus, remember? he was upset about his height or something.

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You have no right to criticize incels, soren.

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... frick you

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:chudsmu#g:

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Don't go all soyjacker on me, I thought you were the one zoomer that wasn't a "sharter"

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Soyjaks are fun soren, deal with it.

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yeah and I totes love "forever :foreveralone: alone face" and "le derp :derp: face"

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NAS

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I've never understood why peak moid fantasy seems to revolve around a single gussy + piss and shit.

Why not a village full of gussy and like pushups or naps between cummies?

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Well if you'd kept reading you'd know that there is a whole prison full of gussy

So much gussy that the guards can murder them with wild abandon for offenses like being too shy to poop

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justified tbh

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Even in their fantasies they can't imagine fricking more than a single foid, at least the Chinese have the good sense to have a different girl for everyday of the month

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:marseygeisha::marseygeisha::marseygeisha::marseygeisha::marseygeisha::marseygeisha: :marseybuff: :!marseygeisha::!marseygeisha::!marseygeisha::!marseygeisha::!marseygeisha::!marseygeisha:

Least polygamous Xianxia MC.

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Sadistcels seething over haremchads.

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>Hurt women, why would I hurt any of my girlfriends

T. Giga Chad with a harem of every legal foid on earth

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It's about degradation and power.

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is this your personal submission to the fan fiction contest?

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You're ruining the surprise :derpwhy:


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You never explained what your deal is. Why have you impersonated some mid egirl for years?

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I think doe is high tier :/


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Yeah she had the sense to leave this place lmao

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It hurts to realize that a woman—an OF thot, no less—is smarter and makes better decisions than all of us.


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She a 7 at best

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trans lives matter

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Because they are the most mentally sane rdrama user

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don't listen to them. doe is obviously the creepy catfish making onlyfans money off your pics, what a disgrace :marseycringe: what reasons do you think she might have for spending years doing that?

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You must not have noticed the week rdrama's top twenty posts were about you.

Maybe you were out of town.

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Source? Source? Do you have a source?

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:#marseykingcrown:

500 DC sent.

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I posted incels.is here like 20 times. The thing is a lot of them are probably genuine threats to the public.

When I posted there we had a guy claiming he could grow his legs using music.

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The thing is a lot of them are probably genuine threats to the public

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When I posted there we had a guy claiming he could grow his legs using music.

And how'd that turn out for him? Surely he posted proof of him curing himself of manlet disease.

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I miss that Governments Get Gfs guy. He was hilarious.

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he was the first person I ever saw use the term "incel"

"that's a stupid term, it'll never stick" - me

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Whatever happened with him? That dude needed to be locked up away from his mother.

I wonder if he seethed when he found out Chris Chan scored some mom gussy :marseyhmm:

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No idea. His wordpress blog is gone, all I could find was this ED page about him https://encyclopediadramatica.online/Marjan_Siklic.

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>For example, in 2004 when a girl called him for s*x he threw his cell phone under the bed and started shaking in fear uncontrollably.

Seems like the government got him a girlfriend and then he didn't hold up his end of the bargain. He's like an dolemonger who can't even be arsed to show up at the JobCentre+.

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mogs me

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:#marseyhesfluffyyouknow:

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Joined Dec 2021

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Posts: 62006

~93 messages per day. :wow:

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I don't know how that is even possible. I average like 4 posts/comments a day and it's hard even when most are just Marseys or gifs

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have you tried being an incel?

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GOOD point :marseytedsimp2:

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:marseytedsimp2: this is an adorable :mersya: marsey :marseyheadshotgory: @TED_SIMP

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>minoko

yellow fever

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Im starting to think these incel people might have something wrong with them

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people

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“Your time is over,” said Weiss to the scared girl. “Men are back.”

Uhh incredibly based . This is what incel core is about. Taking power back from destructive pampered foids and establishing dominance. This is art.

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@FrozenCorpse had not been injured too much from her fall; she remained on the ground due to shock. A minute later, she finally rose, realizing it was time to go. But before she could escape, @Hotep grabbed her arm and bound her wrists in plastic handcuffs. “Your time is over,” said @Hotep to the scared e-girl. “Men are back.”


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His pitch black skin contrasted contrasted against is brilliant white egyptian robes and neme. An eerie smile spread across his face as he soaked in Frozen's terror. “We Wuz Kangz” he bellowed with a hardy laugh.

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!sd marsey black egyptian marsey in white robes

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:#marseyitbegins:

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I thought the floating pills on that page were flies like our shit awards at first

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:#stoningpills:

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Interesting... it glows at the end

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Weiss is a !germs name, of course he is into shit and piss

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What RWBY does to mfer

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I wonder how prevalent the cross-pollination is between incels and Nip cartoon porn writers are? Like they definitely take ideas from each other, but which group of smelly, unfrickable moids comes up with the ideas first?

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They had been unprepared for the violent consequences of their civil disobedience. An apt metaphor, Camaro thought, for centuries of women wreaking havoc and expecting no consequences for their actions.

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"Wait!” said Marcy, standing again. “I am a man!” Benoit cocked his head, went outside to get another officer and the two of them entered the bus. The second officer walked up to the hunched over woman, visually inspected her, shook his head, and talked briefly with Benoit. While Marcy had a short brown pixie haircut and her boobs were not large, it was clear that she was female from her waifish features. She had a pretty face, although she wore little makeup.

Carp hands typed this story.

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Yo you really read all this shit? I got to the part where the officer pinched that chicks labia and I think I'm gonna tap out

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read all this shit

Someone doesn't know carp is a huge poopy pants :marseyjeans: :marseysmug2:

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I wonder who these people plan to vote for

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I remember when /r/braincels got banned, I checked out incels.is, but quickly found that they were too deranged to be worth talking to.

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@pizzashill smiled with bloodlust. While he'd thoroughly enjoyed the free s*x over the last month, what really drove him was the opportunity to beat women.

This is amazing

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Even when I came up with my own femcel dream world I made sure the men lived in relative comfort. Wtf is up with incels, even if I think most moids are disgusting I'm capable of empathy and understanding that they can suffer too. Like there's just something fundamentally broken about them that needs to be fixed.

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:#marseyakshually: if you'd READ THE WORK you'd know that these are only the problematic women who won't accept the new world order, the author goes on for awhile about how good women are out there in the free world putting on poop shows in open air garden bathrooms :marseyeyeroll:


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I'm capable of empathy and understanding

femcel

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trans lives matter

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Incels and :marseytrain:s should be sent to the minecraft re-education camp. They need to take showers and dry off in an oven.

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#bothsides

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Bro I aint readin all that shit

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>Weiss

:marseymerchant::typing:

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