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JoyceCarolOates joyce/carol MY KITTY IS POINTED AT THE WORLD  1yr ago (image post) 850 thread views #166334

This is an actual poem from the current issue of The Paris Review :marseysnoo:

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https://www.theparisreview.org/poetry/7974/john-wick-is-so-tired-kyra-wilder

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Can someone unironically explain why everyone ITT think this sucks? It's not great, but it's definitely better than I can do.

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Few points:

>no consistent meter

>no rhyming scheme

>written by a w*men :marseypuke:

but it's definitely better than I can do.

Memes aside, do you honestly think this requires any skill to write?

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It's not not a poem just because it doesn't rhyme you complete hick

Does Paradise Lost rhyme? Bruh.

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I didn't say it's not poetry, I said it sucked

Does Paradise Lost suck?

Neighbor, try giving it a read sometime and you tell me.

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I don't rate it either lol

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>no consistent meter or rhyming scheme

What are you, a 19th century highschool English teacher? 90% of poetry written in the last century has uneven meter and verse.

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90% of poetry written in the last century sucks

Correct

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