So far I have a scene where there is a black female character in the group of protagonists (she comes out later that she's transgender) and the fight seems evenly matched with the bad guys, but then a LOT more bad guys show up and the fight starts to turn in their direction, so this character says (really blackly) "aww HECK nawh!" and gets this burst of energy and nearly single-handedly kills all the bad guys and saves the day, and when the noise has cleared one of the white men says something quirky to her like "well THAT was unexpected!"
That's pretty much what I've got so far, just need help with the rest of the movie.
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Add a few serious parts where a relationship is ending or something but then put a funny quip at the crescendo of the scene. That's both comedy and drama at once and double the genres will make it twice as good to watch.
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He can be like "so... I guess it would be too much to ask to have one more round?"
And she makes a face like, no not gonna happen.
But then it cuts to an intensely loud s*x scene for 5 seconds (no nudity because it's PG-13 for tickets) and then cuts to them lying in bed after and they're both like "no, no, we definitely have to break up."
And she's like "okay... one more time?" And then one more 5 second s*x scene, then a cold cut to the rest of the movie.
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