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Pastel Boy/Kissr saying this shit  1yr ago (text post) 366 thread views #177564

Anyone here a writecel?

I've never written anything more than essays for college, but I can't help but be curious of the literary prowess that my fellow dramatards may possess

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Yeah, I'm a really gifted poet but I don't like to brag about it.

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Rhyme and meter or "free" "verse" (cute twinkry)

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Idk I just like rhyming shit. I do respect meter. See

The Autumn fall left none at all

But limbs laid bare to needled stares,

For evergreens see seasons' stings

While foresight sheathes what lies beneath

The Autumn fall, red-golden sprawl,

Lost leaves who sow but never know

The acorn's quest there laid to rest,

Twixt roots that spread amongst the dead.

Does wisdom spoil within the soil,

Or would they see as it should be

And speak their worth into the Earth

To never tell that Autumn fell?

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It's alright. Nothing to write home about. Not really seeing the images and feeling the emotions you're going for.

I reckon if you use older verbiage you have to use it perfectly. Any less comes off as try hard.

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