I need help on my incel poem

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I like you as a friend!

No I won't have s*x with you

You think you're safe, foid?
The beta uprising is upon us.
Your life will be null and void.
You'll be my state-assigned waifu, I trust.
Women belong in the kitchen, not employed.

Does anyone have any suggestions for my incel poetry?

Heavenly blessed, warmly dressed by sunrise,

The clouds gently lay as blush on her face.

A thousand men rallied to hold her in place,

And they fought to push her into the skies

But heaven was jealous and sent circling storms,

Tears smeared the veil that was laid out by the dawn.

And men saw that now her beauty was gone,

What was once comely and radiant, was now haggard and worn.

But in twilight the weary find new roles to play:

A dowager queen seeks her king 'mongst the broken,

And vows again to never break the oath she'd once spoken;

Alone at her window in the last light of day.

And the wind whispered through the reeds on the beach,

"The clouds you see once too kissed my cheeks."

Idk this is how I would write it.

It's got good imagery but it's inconsistent. The narrative is either too loose or not evocative enough. I changed the rhyme scheme just cos. I don't care for the alliteration