I have total aphantasia, which means my minds eye is dark. I have 0 senses up in my brains. Any tips for writing detailed scenes without the senses?
I’ve always wanted to write, but always struggled writing detail into the story. I love writing stories themselves, but loathe the detail in creating a scene around the story. I think I don’t focus on it because it does absolutely nothing for me. Even when I read books, I basically gloss over the setting. I just need to know an overview of the setting and I’ll be good.
As usual, the comments give moderately decent, superficial advice while eluding the fundamental problem: You can't describe a scene if you can't imagine one.
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Go through published books and try to identify what kind of tone scenes have (e.g. scary, sad, cosy) and write down how they're described. Make a list of recurring details and use them when you want to generate that effect.
Here are some that I've noticed:
Warmth normally seems positive and safe. E.g. a fire crackling in the hearth, or a steaming mug of hot chocolate.
Beep boop. It appears the organic beings are drawn to the olfactory sensations correlated with the preparation of food. I shall investigate further.
R/writing is the absolute worst hobby/artistic sub. Imagine if half of the music sub posts were about being tone-deaf or deaf-deaf and everyone was just sucking each other off about how valid that is. Or talking about how you don't need to listen to music to be a musician.
Also check out my previous post, in which an neurodivergent train wants to be a writer despite being completely unable to concentrate on reading:
https://rdrama.net/post/139302/marseybrainlet-giga-r-slur-asks-if-she
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Reminder that anything greater than 1 means you're an NPC.
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I'm not sure how to score this one
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That's the average rDrama user: not an NPC, but too neurodivergent to think of anything outside of trains sneed gay porn and their failed trolling subs.
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Today I learned that mentally unwell people think there are apples in their brains.
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I have a banana in mine.
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I can visualize apples that don't even exist
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I'm neurodivergent, so I can do number one. Heck, I can cut it open, peel it, put it back on the tree, cut the tree down, make it into boards, and envision the roots uptaking water and nitrogen after I reassemble it.
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But can you imagine getting laid?
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Lol at all the NPCs below.
I've got a full motion render of a shiny apple dropping off a tree on a sunny late summers dawn, landing on the blade of an axe and being chopped in half with droplets of juice spraying out and seeds flying slow motion through their air. This is all in ultra high definition.
Anything less than this and you're an NPC.
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I just imagine it dropping on newton's head lol stupid nerd can't even catch
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this is
obv because I have aphantasia but you don't need images in your brain to have an inner world, you need an inner monologue
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For me I get one but it’s like a flash
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I see it like a slideshow of me feeding the apple to a dog. I don’t think dogs eat apples
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Doggy![:marseyexcited: :marseyexcited:](/e/marseyexcited.webp)
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Same. Never super sustained
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Third. My imagination for every other sense is stupidly vivid though![:marseyspecial: :marseyspecial:](/e/marseyspecial.webp)
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Agreed. Can imagine touches, tastes, smells super clearly. But visuals are weird and ephemeral
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Every kind of taste and smell of apple comes to mind, but for images I get flashes of sliced apple, the feeling and ambiance of slicing apple. It's way easier to imagine apple in a vivid and sustained way if I picture it in my hands, where I'm deciding on the quality of the apple.
I cook a lot
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Yes, generally it has to implicate the touch or taste or smell sense for the visual to be highly clear
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Can you hold it longer if you imagine it rotating, being thrown, etc.?
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Yes, I can but I need to close my eyes
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Imagine having to rely on visuals and not holding the Platonic concept of Apple in your mind above any mundane concerns like sight or touch
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Thank you, my brain apple is in remission
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Do you have an inner voice?
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Yes I have a soul
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Who doesn't?
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Lots of people. That's where the npc meme really started. The whole "i can visualize objects" was then started as npc cope.
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Yes, lots of people per capita.
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black people
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Only one? Weak.
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It's hard to not have it. And I have an easy time to imagine hearing music that I have heard.
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The apple in my mind is so real that I can eat it and derive nourishment from it.
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