sirpingsalothe/him
Never ask a woman her age, a man his salary, or my thoughts on age of consent laws
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This is really great dramartistry, but I would like to make one small suggestion, if I may. A lot of the conversation is still too logical and reasonable. People are actually listening to each other and responding to each others points. There's no real anger, no blood in the water.
What I'm getting at is that somebody needs to be accusing an LGBTQIA+ of being racist and hating Arabs because they don't want them to have bibeo games, and then somebody else needs to tacitly accuse that person of supporting gay murder. It's just a minor change to your masterpiece, but I really think that ought to raise the temperature by several degrees.
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This is really great dramartistry, but I would like to make one small suggestion, if I may. A lot of the conversation is still too logical and reasonable. People are actually listening to each other and responding to each others points. There's no real anger, no blood in the water.
What I'm getting at is that somebody needs to be accusing an LGBTQIA+ of being racist and hating Arabs because they don't want them to have bibeo games, and then somebody else needs to tacitly accuse that person of supporting gay murder. It's just a minor change to your masterpiece, but I really think that ought to raise the temperature by several degrees.
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