r/writers discusses a 60k word gay Gilmore Girls fanfiction about 9/11 written by a 14 year old

"The year is 2001, and being gay is r-slurred"

lol

wheres YOUR 226 page fan fic? I'd rather my 14 year old be writing gay 9/11 fan fic instead of getting groomed online ig

Omg thank you for posting this!! I am going to read the whole thing

"Chocolate!" Jess replied, and while he started drinking the milkshake, I would also join in and drink from my respective straw. I felt the chocolate through my tongue rush into my veins, feeling the sugar help satisfy my hunger even more. I then smiled at myself because I can always love myself a chocolate addiction. After that, the drink was finished, but then, Jess then toppled me over and began kissing me.

It didn't feel like a regular kiss, though. It felt more chocolatey than others, and that's when I began to want to kiss him too because I would want to know more about chocolate kisses.

I pressed my chocolate-filled tongue onto Jess's tongue passionately. I hugged onto his waist and held it tighter the more it grew passionate. I gripped onto his butt, while he gripped onto my butt. When the chocolate flavor began to stop, we stopped making out in the car. I then got the car ready and we started driving.

I only have two things on my mind: kisses and kissing Jess.

Since there was a terrorist attack announced today, it was mandatory to close all schools if this happened.

I was in a tornado-like state of mind as to why someone would do that, all of the emotions on that tornado were pessimistic. I was angry at the people who could do such a thing, and I was worried for anyone who was involved in the incident. This was such an unfortunate day for America.

"Ok," I wiped away my tears, which to be honest, was a bit therapeutic to free emotions from a cage. "I hope he doesn't become something who he isn't and thrives to be his usual self."

"That's good," Todd smiled and unlocked the stall. "Just don't make sure that the rumor of us being gay is true."

"I won't!" I called out and walked to the lunchroom. Although I wish the burden of my sexuality was lifted. I wish I could scream in pride that I was bisexual and loved being a cute twink. But for now, I have bigger fish to fry.

but most of it isn't laughably bad tbh, just kind of boring and plotless. one day it'll be 'lol remember that whole fricking book I wrote when I was 14?'

Oh my God, this guy seriously wrote it in Google docs instead of paying 300$ for Adobe InDesign to do it like a professional? I bet his line spacings don't even have custom definitions and his figures aren't pixel-alligned. What a fricking pleb, and he's 14 already as well, he really should know better at this point. You will never make it, you will never get published, might as well start looking for those vacancies at McDonalds to plan for the future.

In contrast you're always so eloquent MIMW

do the z00'smers think we walked around the streets pike in hand ready to spear murder the first gay we cam across ?

>the year is 2001, when being gay isn't really normally accepted

reminder that from 2001-2005 the highest-rated tv show for the 18-49 demo was literally about two gay guys and their strag hags

smdh you know at least 99% of that must have been bigots hate-watching because in the 2000s america was a theocracy

I read the thread about this on RSP and there's a funny line in there about the main character not being able to read an analog watch/clock (in 2001) like a modern day Zoomer lol.

0 comments conparing it to My Inmortal. Sad

bro wtf is that crusty butt screen

Roasting a 14 year old's gay Gilmore Girls fanfiction is peak rdrama

!biofoids peak fanfic post

Holy frick that was hilarious! I cannot stop laughing! Take my upkong! Take another from my second account! Heck, take a silver, why not? Scratch that, a gold! Scratch that, a platinum even! God, just come to my house and plunge your 2-incher into my gaping butthole already! You can have my wallet afterwards too! Take the credit cards too, I'll even give you the PIN numbers! Heck, you can take the whole darn house while you're at it! You can even have my wife and kids if you want! I'm willing to go into poverty just because your post on reddit.com was that funny! I think there's only one thing that would have made your post even funnier, though:

If it wasn't a goddarn repost

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In terms of sheer volume of work this btfos the dipshits on that sub pretty hard

Good content

Can one of the russian bots on this site give me a chatgpt summary. I'm banned.

I need jenny nicholson to do a reading video on this, yesterday